开头倒叙
a) Last week was memorable when I had a meaningful experience. b) Last week, I did sth, which left me a deep impression / impressed me a lot. ii.
中间部分,图中要点
a) 核心动词发生前提(时间、地点、目的等)
With beams of sunshine showering over the ground , we arrived at the park. b) 核心动作
It didn’t take long before we got to the school gate. Plenty of tourists were already in the park, appreciating and embracing this beautiful season.
We explored many places in Beijing, among which the experience of tasting Roast Beijing Duck in Quanjude restaurant stood out. Seeing this, I couldn’t help expressing my amazement. Without hesitation, I decided to take the dog to the pet hospital.
c) 结果(客观环境、主观感受)
A sense of satisfaction flooded into my heart. He was so delighted that a broad smile spread over his face. Joy danced all the way to my heart.
It was at the moment that we felt charm of this lovely season, not only scenery, but also the heart.
Even some tourists standing near us, spoke highly of us. The old was grateful and praised with me with his thumb up. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our activity, which would be unforgettable for all of us.
iii.
结尾感受
a) From this experience, I felt proud of being a Chinese and felt it is my duty to introduce Chinese culture to the world. b) Today I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot. c) The inferiority complex had melt away, and I realized that underneath our thoughts, each person is a genius.
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